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Aspen Education Group on Fornits Wiki
Anne Bonney:
--- Quote from: ""Guest"" ---I see it a little differently. The point the guest was trying to make was that sure the kids are detained. They have to be. The parents are aware that the kids will be detained there for a predefined period of time whether it be a week or 3 years. If you have ever parented a child the last thing you would want is to send them off to a place that was not secure or could not contain them. A parent could not sleep at night thinking their child could just run off, especially in a state he/she wasn’t familiar. So detaining them at the school is one aspect of what the parents are paying for.
But as a reader (adult) looking at this persons site for the first time and sees that his language is sophomoric it doesn’t spark curiosity for the reader to continue rather it gives the impression it is a kids site or a parody. People looking for honest information will move on after the first few lines. If the site is intended to target younger folks, the advice might be off and I could agree they may enjoy it.
I tend to side with the guest on his/her constructive criticism. The site is great, just think the guest felt you could get more readers (or more educated readers) if you upgraded the grammar a bit.
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It ain't your site so don't fucking worry about it.
Detainees is actually too polite. Deb's got it. Prisoners.
Anonymous:
If you don’t mind, it is not my site either but the guest, the second one which you called who, had a good point. You need to use the level of grammar which matchs the reader you want to attract. I think if you inserted prisoners where it says detainees you would drive away even more people and only retain the interest of kids or people who are high, like this Anne Bonney person, the pirate bird, seems to be.
You Americans can be such bloody snobs, I am starting to like the French, fuck off yourself dyke!
Anne Bonney:
How 'bout you let us worry about it, huh? You're some anonymouse (although it seems you probably are one of Who's multiples).
Why are you assuming I'm high? And if I was, what difference would THAT make? Is there something wrong with getting high?
Anonymous:
--- Quote from: ""Anne Bonney"" ---How 'bout you let us worry about it, huh? You're some anonymouse (although it seems you probably are one of Who's multiples).
Why are you assuming I'm high? And if I was, what difference would THAT make? Is there something wrong with getting high?
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Oh, now I am the who person, speaking of multiples you seem to be the one using the word “usâ€
Covergaard:
I am from Denmark, so my English could be better. I apology if that is a problem. Hopefully someone would fix it.
What remains is that they are detained at the facility. I understand that some parents do find it good. Particularly if they want to postpone solving the problem until they have gathered the strength.
But the issue about detaining persons if I can jump to the conclusion that children should be considered persons is where my cultural background properly collide with yours. I come from a country where people has to be convicted to treatment if the outside world (family included) do find that it is necessary.
People have died on that account. Just last month a mother, who haven given birth to a child denied receiving blood because she was a member of Jehovah's Witnesses. The poor child lost his mother, but should the doctor have given her blood against her will? It was going before the court, but she died before there was a ruling. That is the price you have to pay for a principle.
That is however I price I am willing to pay. My mother is from Finland. Some of the family did not manage to flee during WWII and ended up on the wrong side of the border. People, who were not following the rules of the communists, were detained and suddenly they confessed to a lot of criminal activites during "group therapy". The methods were perhaps a little hasher than most of the facilities, but if you look at the prison documentaries on Youtube, the conditions are almost the same at Tranquility Bay as a russian youth prison. But the russian youths knows when they are going to be released.
As for being a student while learn to play the piano: The student does learn something but the lesson is over at some point and the student can go home and join his or her family.
If we have to be more neutral, all the articles must have a chapter about how runaway attempts is handled, if the child is going to be expelled or held back with force. And the detainees has to be referred to as children or teenagers. I will have to think about that.
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