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Covergaard:
I have created a sub-category for the company, where the facilities and programs will appear.

Aspen Category

Bunnie:
Youth Care Is a Aspen Program, they recently had a death there.
not all the details have come out yet.
http://wwf.fornits.com/viewtopic.php?t=22179

TheWho:

--- Quote from: ""Covergaard"" ---I have created a sub-category for the company, where the facilities and programs will appear.

Aspen Category
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Just passing by and I was reading your categories and you refer to the kids as being detained or detainees.  I stopped reading any further because it is not language they use in the US to describe kids in school and gives off the feel of being a mockumentary of some sort.  I spent most of my life in the US.  Parents or readers will not take you seriously unless you word it differently or try to make it more factual.
Technically you are correct, all kids are detained somewhere either at home or away until age 18, but if you want to be taken seriously and have people read further into your page I would suggest changing the wording a bit.  Maybe something like “Mandatory attendanceâ€

Anne Bonney:

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--- Quote from: ""Covergaard"" ---I have created a sub-category for the company, where the facilities and programs will appear.

Aspen Category
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Just passing by and I was reading your categories and you refer to the kids as being detained or detainees.  I stopped reading any further because it is not language they use in the US to describe kids in school and gives off the feel of being a mockumentary of some sort.  I spent most of my life in the US.  Parents or readers will not take you seriously unless you word it differently or try to make it more factual.
Technically you are correct, all kids are detained somewhere either at home or away until age 18, but if you want to be taken seriously and have people read further into your page I would suggest changing the wording a bit.  Maybe something like “Mandatory attendanceâ€

Covergaard:

--- Quote from: "Guest" ---Just passing by and I was reading your categories and you refer to the kids as being detained or detainees.  I stopped reading any further because it is not language they use in the US to describe kids in school and gives off the feel of being a mockumentary of some sort.  I spent most of my life in the US.  Parents or readers will not take you seriously unless you word it differently or try to make it more factual.
Technically you are correct, all kids are detained somewhere either at home or away until age 18, but if you want to be taken seriously and have people read further into your page I would suggest changing the wording a bit.  Maybe something like “Mandatory attendanceâ€
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