I must agree with Jordan, the anon poster needs to shut the fuck up, no room for racist comments anywhere. Hey asshole, he at least had the guts to put up his work for everyone to see, if you want to say anything at least be constructive.
Yes, it is amaturish, but its not all that bad. The song is pretty good, actually, its really good, just coz you don't like the type of music doesnt mean its bad you dumbass. The biggest problem is the first two guys look timid and scared, and I think that hurts the video. If they were more comfortable it would flow better. They don't have any presence, but that will come in time. Also, I understand they are going for a look, but they look like confused hippies, all dirty and shit. Overall its a very well done video, simple, to the point just introducing them.