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Treatment Abuse, Behavior Modification, Thought Reform => The Troubled Teen Industry => Topic started by: Awake on September 17, 2010, 09:58:47 PM

Title: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Awake on September 17, 2010, 09:58:47 PM

I’m curious what would happen if those who experience a program could express it in a Haiku, Japanese poem. It is a very simplistic form of 17 syllables used in 3 phrases. The first phrase is 5 syllables, the second 7, and the third 5 syllables. That’s it. Here’s mine.


Haiku


They told me the gems     (5 syllables)
 
Were down deep, but reachable  (7)

Long dark hole, no gems  (5)



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Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Eliscu2 on September 17, 2010, 10:40:18 PM

:seg:

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Che Gookin on September 17, 2010, 11:12:36 PM

four long years in hell
up to my balls in bullshit
fuck that, never again

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Eliscu2 on September 17, 2010, 11:54:21 PM

CHE...YOUR FUCKIN AVATAR IS GONE AND IT REALLY BOTHERS ME :waaaa:
DO I NEED TO SEND YOU A NEW ONE?
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAATEVER...TIME TO WATCH AN OLD MOVIE. :peace:

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Che Gookin on September 18, 2010, 12:19:33 AM

sure, go ahead and send me another avatar.

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: none-ya on September 18, 2010, 08:07:44 AM

For Max
 

First there was haiku (5)
Then there was not a haiku (7)
Max deleted his (5)


Doesn't have to rhyme , does it?

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Hedge on September 23, 2010, 05:25:08 PM

We went in as kids
Who needed help, not abuse
Few came out okay

Title: first day
Post by: Froderik on September 23, 2010, 08:08:14 PM

goodbye mom & dad

stand up, sit up, face forward

have a seat, druggie

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Awake on November 10, 2010, 11:21:50 PM

---


I can't, but I must

What they want, I can't give them

Then I won't be me.


--- a double bind

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Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Shadyacres on November 11, 2010, 12:53:29 AM

must get out of here

let go of my damn belt loop

oh shit I can't breathe

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Shadyacres on November 11, 2010, 11:00:33 AM

You people are nuts

I don't want to be like you

take Whooter instead

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Froderik on November 11, 2010, 11:07:49 AM

Quote from: "Shadyacres"

You people are nuts

I don't want to be like you

take Whooter instead

 :rofl:

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: Troll Control on November 11, 2010, 11:18:27 AM

The program is done

Whooter tried to bring it back

Now Whooter is banned

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: RobertBruce on November 11, 2010, 01:08:39 PM

Unqualified hacks.

Spewed off bullshit therapy.

Everyone abused.

Title: Re: Program Haiku: How was it for you?
Post by: try another castle on November 15, 2010, 01:19:31 AM

It didn't get good

Til they started raping me

Then it was awesome