Fornits
General Interest => Open Free for All => Topic started by: Froderik on September 23, 2014, 01:53:54 PM
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(https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3862/15330441251_9ee8b30463.jpg)
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We will murder whomever we please without provocation or warning. Go ahead, say something!
https://plus.google.com/117303045388933921465/posts/E976cBDu4hR
Please let me know if the above linked article makes any sense at all? I seriously need some feedback right now.
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Updated. Reviews, questions, suggestions, please?
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Yeah it seems like a well-written article.. what do you want to feedback on specifically?
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Thanks :-* Did you understand it? I mean is there stuff into the mix that doesn't make sense in the context? If so, I need to either compress (prolly a bit, I usually do) and/or better illustrate the connection. Anything that just plain doesn't make sense at all? Any other suggestions?
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It seemed comprehensible enough at first glance.. I'll have to read through it all and see.
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Overall, it's a good blog entry with a vital message. Thumbs up! It could be a little more concise, maybe, but not if it would cramp your writing style. The highlighted text was a little off-putting to me; at first I thought it might be a glitch, or something. I have not upgraded to G+ and don't intend to. At this point I don't want it for anything but email...but that's just me. And I recognized the background picture (I love that photo; I had saved it a while ago from some page I don't remember.) I had to skip the part about the kid in str8 because I had already read your account of it years ago, and because my brain just can't take it right now. Nice job overall, and I hope some of this feedback is helpful.
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Yes, thanks.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FvEBmEo4IA0&t=37m18s (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FvEBmEo4IA0&t=37m18s)
http://www.whale.to/b/brien1.html (http://www.whale.to/b/brien1.html)
https://intheknow7.wordpress.com/tag/senator-robert-byrd/ (https://intheknow7.wordpress.com/tag/senator-robert-byrd/)
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Any other suggestions?
Why Speak of Violence? (Porcfest X) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXQw5FDcZco#ws)
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Well yeah, that's the conclusion. What about the bridge? Where's the bridge? I can't find that confounded bridge!