@psy - this clip was far more viewable than the previous one (probably because it was quite a bit shorter?) Some comments...
Very creative! Really liked the way you blurred students' faces (X-high contrast in green of the negative), the occasional (and simple) text explanations, etc. Concur with Castle re. volume. I had difficulty reading the case files superimposed at one point; perhaps focusing in on the portions you highlighted for most of the duration that they are on screen might help, then zooming out to show what the document is... Or perhaps full-screen doc, then zoom in, hold for awhile, then zoom out again. I think you tried to do that, but the sequence was not consistent and that might confuse people. Also: you might want to have a brief explanatory paragraph accompanying the clip (for people to read) to set the scene for those not in the know. E.g., was this at the motel where ostracized kids get placed to prevent their contaminating the brainwashing attempts at Benchmark proper?
All in all, I'm very very impressed. Thanks for sharing that with us.
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