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Offline Anonymous

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I took it back
« on: June 12, 2003, 12:32:00 PM »
And finally there is a replacement
For the life I had to exchange
The one that got twisted too young to redeem
Rendered void by a power mislead

But finally there is a replacement.
The reality of a happiness found.
Not from the lessons of life number one
But the freedom my own hands build now.

Let the 3 am voices grieve loudly,
Let the memories haunt till the dawn.
When the sun rises forth, this second life
Is a treasure they never can own.
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I took it back
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2003, 06:04:00 PM »
That's fucking cool, man!  Cool indeed.
The KIDS of El Paso Guy
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« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2003, 07:46:00 PM »
Is that a song? It would sound neat with some music in the background. Great piece! :smokin:
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Offline Anonymous

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« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2003, 09:46:00 AM »
Thanks. I don't know what it is. :smile:
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Offline ehm

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« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2003, 11:09:00 PM »
Quote
On 2003-06-12 09:32:00, Anonymous wrote:

"And finally there is a replacement

For the life I had to exchange

The one that got twisted too young to redeem

Rendered void by a power mislead



But finally there is a replacement.

The reality of a happiness found.

Not from the lessons of life number one

But the freedom my own hands build now.



Let the 3 am voices grieve loudly,

Let the memories haunt till the dawn.

When the sun rises forth, this second life

Is a treasure they never can own.





"

that really is fucking awesome... ::rocker::
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